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  • Poetry » Literature, General
    Re: A Spark to write again

    The title is what really attracted me to this poem cause personally I can relate to it as I have been a lazy writer in recent times. Now to your ...

    Aug 26, 2015

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Life Cycle

    If I am to say this poem dose not rhyme nicely I'll be a big liar, the problem I have with the poem is that you leave the content wide ...

    Sep 16, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Half A Hope

    First of I must say your writing definitely grabs a reader from the beginning to the end I like the way you keep your sentences simple and short, it gives ...

    Aug 22, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: the Most Beautiful Song in the World.

    First I have to say that I enjoyed reading this poem (was smiling all through) I loved the way you used imagery and personification to transfer the mind into the ...

    May 7, 2013

  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: So Lost You Can't Be Found

    For a moment there I was transported into the world of little red, this is one poem that takes a child's storybook and shows all of us that the story ...

    Mar 31, 2013

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: Once I Wrote A Poem

    The poem opens up by putting an image of a person trying to come up with a piece of literary work but is first confused and sacred cause he is ...

    Mar 31, 2013

  • Poetry » General, Horror
    Re: The Grave

    Personally I like your use of imagery to put and depict in the mind of the reader vividly the idea of death. 'The day is gone, its last rays bleeding ...

    Mar 31, 2013

  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical
    Re: Red House

    personally I like the dominant use of Imagery and symbolism in the poem most especially the use of the word 'red' which I think the writer uses to symbolize a ...

    Mar 28, 2013


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