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Chapter 1 I slowly came back to reality as I read the date on the letter. Monday October 3rd, that was today! “We need to go to the old warehouse, ...

i think you should finish the story and its really intense and i want to read more and find out whats up with the story

This is really descriptive and i thought that the last paragraph was really great it seemed that you had actually experienced dying and it was really beautiful

I dont know if its good or what i would just like some feed back thanks :) this is just the prologue The paper I had been holding fluttered to ...

Okay, first of all it does NOT suck. its really good. it appears that you put a lot of thought and effort into it. the high suspense was a bit ...

I think its an extremly emotional heatfelt letter and i could easily see someone actuallty leaving a note like this to someone they care about. the only thing it think ...