onthesurface93

Hey! First off, I loved it. I thought it gave a really good, strong start to the novel. Maybe you could have held off on a few of the smaller ...

Hi! I've just joined, and I'm pretty much just looking for some positive feedback on my writing. I've only posted one thing so far, so i hope, if that's a ...

Prologue The ground beneath me is cruel; it slows the tread of my feet, aids those of the beast on my heels...feeds my life to the Gods of Death. As ...