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  • Ressurection ...

    hey, im onsa from england, uk....was browsing net and found this forum, its very cool indeed getting an opinion on a piece can be so difficult at times. im posting ...

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  • REDEMPTION (i need comments to improve it)

    I had never seen him so weak, so out of control. As he walked towards me I saw through his eyes, the still stare told his story. I knew what ...

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  • girl and house (needs work i knw!)

    Once there was a house, Pink roofed and cracked walls within. The path twisted and turned, The fence splintered passers by and the chimney never worked. One there was a ...

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