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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Panda's View

    Fix up your flow. And the poll is superflourus at best. As are the exclamation points. Your rhyming scheme is inconsistant, and when it does rhyme, the rhymes are forced ...

    May 20, 2007


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