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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Panda's View

    Fix up your flow. And the poll is superflourus at best. As are the exclamation points. Your rhyming scheme is inconsistant, and when it does rhyme, the rhymes are forced ...

    May 20, 2007


That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)