onceuponatim3xo

Hi, I'd really appreciate it if you could review this. There isn't really any fantasy in this section, but my story is fantasy. There may be a few typos - ...

I started to write this story one way, but decided to start over and change it some. You can't really tell that it's fantasy yet - but it is Please ...

So, I've been messing around with the idea for a long time - and now I've decided on how I want the plot. If you've read my other works, they ...

Thank you soooo much for any and all critiques! Here's Chapter 2: CHAPTER 2 By: Onceuponatim3xo A long while later, we finally had arrived at Riveroaks. Our relatives were waiting ...

So, if you've read the prologue to Eyes of the Empire, you'll notice that I merged it in with chapter one. I hope you like it! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I unsheathed my ...

Here's chapter one if you want to read it. You don't have to, but if you don't you probably won't understand the first few paragraphs I hope you like it! ...