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Re: -Inconcessus- Twenty
Oh yay! Oh yay! Oh yay! *bounces up and down in excitement* In case you could not tell from the line above I thought your rewrite went very well indeed. ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Mr. Perfect, Chapter 3
Bittersweet : Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it. :) I will try to hype up the suspense a bit more and try not to make it too obvious what ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: Mr. Perfect, Chapter 2
Thanks Bittersweet! I will definitely work on everything that you pointed out. They actually do have finals, after you pointed that out I phoned one of my British friends up ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: Forsaken Ch2 part 2
I really like it!!! Sorry, I can't really get into it now but I really love it. Your plot is AMAZING and you have some great phrases in there. I ...
Aug 21, 2008 -
Re: Mr. Perfect
shelbell: Thank you so much! I will make sure to work on those two things. Of course I will PM you, I am so glad that you enjoyed it! Vampy_Girl15: ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: Mr. Perfect
Writing for love is a pas: Thank you so much!!! I am planning on writing more, this is only the beginning of a long chapter of my life :lol: Lilith: ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Aphrodite's Daughter
Ihighton: Thank you so much for reviewing my piece. I will work on making my paragraphs shorter(this is a constant struggle for me) You are much too kind! I actually ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Through the pain {part 1}
That was really good. I enjoyed it a lot. I like the story a lot, and you give good insight into Julia's mind. There are a few grammer errors but ...
Jul 1, 2008