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hi all. no one really needs to critique this anymore. i can't really do anything to it, because I already handed it in for school. Thanks for all the advice, ...

i like this. although, im not sure how some of the description matches a pear. think about it.

yes i have read it. and my school assignment was a writing prompt that had to relate to that book. Daniel's Story, even though im not the reading type person, ...

thanks for your critique, but im only doing this for a timed writing assignment. i know i messed things up. we only got like 20 min. to do it, so ...