oliviasaurus

*le gasp* ohnoes! stupid gangs... blech. erm. on to the editing. So I thought this story could have been quite powerful, except it wasn't, and that's what bothered me. 1. ...

It took me a while to figure out why you wrote "P.S., we're dying" at the end, because I thought it was a letter from one person to the next. ...

Let me say this first: I hate works of science fiction... usually. Except for this, which is, in my opinion super in an epicly awesome sort of way. Basically the ...