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Re: The Imperfect Day
*le gasp* ohnoes! stupid gangs... blech. erm. on to the editing. So I thought this story could have been quite powerful, except it wasn't, and that's what bothered me. 1. ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: her epoch.
An irritatingly forceful fluttering pulses in my chest. Like wild horses, I think, and I picture them running powerfully across a dry, dusty terrain, kicking up clouds of dirt behind ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Disassembling the Machine
Impetuous, Industriously Plagiarizing engineers lose sight of what is right, we're losing sight of what is real. Magnetized, electrifying, caustic wiring all decays, indoctrinated theorums peeking thr
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Coffee and Breathmints
It took me a while to figure out why you wrote "P.S., we're dying" at the end, because I thought it was a letter from one person to the next. ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: The Sky's on Fire
Let me say this first: I hate works of science fiction... usually. Except for this, which is, in my opinion super in an epicly awesome sort of way. Basically the ...
Dec 15, 2008
