olivia1987uk

I like your idea...but to me the whole thing seemed extremely rushed and the spacing very annoying but that might just be me... If it was my story I'd bulk ...

I like this and would be interested to read more of it! Just a few suggestions though... I lived in the present day only-to be more specific the present party ...

Lol, yes it did make me laugh! I am that daft too...welcome to my world! Hehe! Just to let you know, I make suggestions not corrections...feel free to tell me ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! Don't know whethe anyone has told you but the rules on this site say that you are supposed to have posted two reviews before you submit ...

I'm slowly becoming a big fan of yours young man! I noticed one typo but I can't remember where it was and I'm not in the mood to go searching ...

Completely agree with jasmine...can't see anything else to comment on really. Not usually a piece I'd read but the description was phenomenal. I do think you've captured the essence of ...

Hey! Really enjoyed this piece! Very glad I clicked on it randomly.... Can't really see any mistakes but then again, I was enjoying reading it so wasn't looking at it ...

You see, I am blind. Just a couple of nit pick things really...I think the whole thing would be a lot more interesting and thought provoking if you leave this ...

As a massive RENT fan I just had to click on it as soon as I laid eyes on the title... I actually said to my mum, "I hope this ...

A couple of silly mistakes such as capital letters in the wrong place and missed out words but I don't want to patronise you by pointing this out when a ...

Beautifully written I must admit. I really did enoy it. The topic wouldn't usually be something I'd be interested in but the way its written makes you believe... The only ...

Every book I read of hers becomes my new favourite so of course, at the moment Change of Heart is by far the best! I loved the character of Lucius ...

Hey deafwriter_19! You have a brilliant style of writing! Its very admirable! Anyway, I haven't reviewed any of your work before so I just wanna say I do not correct ...

Hey, I haven't read the previous chapters of this but I certainly will now! Yeah, it is pretty long but I quite onestly didn't notice obviously because I really enjoyed ...

Kelly: Nate Wellington was a bad-boy (bad boy). He was one of those guys that you see pressing a new girl, against a different locker, shoving his tongue as far ...