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The epitome of everything, anything, nothing. Emotions are more than tactile sense, thoughts covert from one another, burnt to the back of my mind, graved over with timeless memories. Un-solitarily ...

-(13+ for a word or two. I forget where I am.)- Your eyes are on a box (I really liked the direct imagery here, the bluntness of the imagery actually ...

To the mortal figure’s disarray, engraved with imperfection and mistakes- a masterpiece of mass destruction, rejected discard of disfunction; was not god’s final work of art, a complex design of ...

I am feeling in a peculiar delusion - my emotions are animated and the mirror reflects a talcun dusting underneath the luminous rays. The talcun frolics crisp and frail, the ...

just as a side note - opium as in, her perfume. she wears YSL opium perfume, ha. and that aroma always reminds me of her, and her homely scent. i ...

I'm writing mom a mothers day poem, but I am stuck, could I perhaps have word suggestions, phrase suggestions, etc? anything to help? It's unedited, the rhythm is off, and ...

Okay. The poem was fairly decent, at least in terms of vocabulary choice and rhyme scheme/meter. However, the theme "disease of the self", though explored in interesting, intricate phrases, never ...

Hi there! This was a neat poem. I thought the line breaks were interesting, and they help enforce your decrepit subject matter. As Sionmara said, this was twisted. As much ...

cancerous thoughts, disease of the mind, infests the figure with mutated design. vitriolic acidic streaming tears fall, ivory skin's engraved with flaws. mulberry bruises, best at empty, rippled intui

Small Treasons ~ You say (loved the layout, especially the lack of punctuation, and I think that as poem is a verbal art, it gives a lovely flow - the ...

this really goes against every poem i write, if you have read my previous poetry, you'd understand i hate poetry like this. but, i found this poem, that i wrote ...

i like it, but don't. it's a love/hate relationship i have with it. - unfinished. advice to continue futhur would be lovely. because i feel that this poem can brew ...

in reply to 13timmy24 the explanation was not part of the poetry, not a preface to it, however it was simply me explaining myself, as i realised not many poets ...

you may find, my poetry is different to many others. i break rules, i hate with a passion, poetry that is simply a few beautiful, but overused words, to describe ...

ah the last sentance needs the punctuation put in it, it depends how you read it. when i read it out loud, it fits the rhythm, however there is no ...