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So, I really really need your help. This is one of my essays for applying to ~college~. I need to cut out at least 50 words, and make it as ...

I really liked this. Like the other reviewer said, you could definitely hear it in your head when you read it. :) They lyrics were nice, and they definitely got ...

I really liked this! It was cute and true, which is always a lovely combination. :) It had a nice overall feel, but it was a bit choppy in some ...

(i'm choking) throat's croaking you're always provoking you made a ring 'round my neck to match the one on my hand (fists pounding) surrounding my heavy heart sounding you're tepid ...

Thanks for your comments and kind words. :] I think maybe I'll try and pry it away from the quote a bit, so it's more free-standing, and then maybe I'll ...

I wrote this for an essay contest, so that's why it's based off of a quote and all that. My English teacher has been strongly recommending that I try and ...

Thank you guys! :) I'll definitely think about the punctuation and some of the words.

This was super fun to read! It had a really nice rhythm to it, which a really added to the fact that it was about dance. It felt a bit ...

Well. Uh. I had issues uploading this, because when I pasted it in all the spaces reverted back to a single space rather than the number that I put in. ...

P.S. If anyone would like to review my poem thing, that would be pretty rad. :)

Thank you, everybody, for you kind words!

Huh. I read this through a few times, and I have to say that I really liked it. I love it when people do what they want to language. Grammar ...

Aw, hooray! He pretty much rocks. Haha, the feeling is reciprocated. :P

Aw, I like this very much! It's got a very nice rhythm to it, despite the shortness. I like the rhyming - it doesn't seemed forced at all, and it ...

Thanks, Jessa! Ah, yes, I see it now! Thank you! I posted something today! This site is getting easier and easier to navigate. :) So many exclamation points in this ...