ohgeorgiepie

This is great!!! Review points; Fixers: -"Mitchell’s warm brown eyes and soft blonde hair were inviting. Like Will." -I think "Like Will's" would make more sense. -"She would never them ...

Ooooh very passionate!!! I haven't read your other poem but I can feel the sense of relief seeping through!!! Just one spelling error... I breathe in. And perhaps "Thanks to ...