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That was a very, very good one :D "I am Nell, a twelve year old girl from [insert small, Twilight referenced, town name] - people like to think I'm normal, ...

The walls are closing in on me. It sounds crazy, I know, but they are. Besides, it wouldn't be the first time somebody would call me crazy. It's the only ...

So, first let me state that I am no expert about this. Now let me say that I thought that they were really, really great. The two things that bothered ...

Sorry about the length!!! This is, without doubt, the longest chapter I've put up yet. It is majorly important to the plot though, so I really can't cut anything out ...

Okay, so I thought this was nice. The part when you talk about a 'he' is a bit confusing though, because you transfer from telling about his love that left ...

I am so sorry it took so long! Finally - I got to it :D The Elders of the Western Realms say that when a parent passes away, their children ...

I'm back! Thank you for your help. I actually really like this chapter - please tell me what you think! :D The Party - Chapter Seven I hadn't missed much, ...

I just wanted to say this really was great. I red the first line twice before realizing it was about her shoes! It was really good. The character display was ...

It's a bit long. Thank you so much for your help! There's a lot more action going on this chapter :D Oh, yeah, before I continue, I fixed chapter five's ...

I love the shadows and lights in the picture. I thought that the thing the lamb was leaning against just amde the picture more adorable! I was distracted by something ...

This is gor the seven deadly sins contest. I think it really needs work, so please help! I appreciate any comment whatsoever. Thank you. Evny I touched Kate's straight dark ...

This is great. I loved this. I can't find anything wrong with it, since you already said you proposefully didn't describe the MC, which I'm guessing is a boy, right? ...

The Party - Chapter Five The entire class groaned, their voices mismatching. "Volunteering," said Mr. Hamilton, pushing his glasses up his nose, "Is a virtue. And that virtue will consist ...

The Party - chapter four sorry about the length, guys. Thank you so much for the help. The gate creaked as usual as I walked the stone road to my ...

This was very, very good. I take a special interest [I guess you could call it that] in the hollocaust, so I can honestly say you were pretty much accurate ...