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For the Postsecrets contest! I got a bit carried away, hehe :D Please help! Thank you! ^__^ number seven guys!!! *** I shivered against the cold of the alley, wrapping ...

They say write about what you know. I know I hurt you. And I know I'm sorry for it. I'm sorry I didn't think it through when I carelessly played ...

Thank you, guys for all your help! I really appreciate it. Letters To Codie is really, really important to me. Teardrop - first off, thanks for the review :) I ...

Letters To Cody Dear Cody, How's it going? Are you liking the new place? I bet it's great. Everyone talks about it like it is. Snowy bit me today and ...

Hi! I hadn't written short stories in a while :D so this might be a bit rusty. Thank you for your help, in advance! It's What I Do It's what ...

Granted, but now they laugh at you every time they see you and make barfing sounds. I wish I could watch the sunrise over Paris.

You are a genius. Simple as that. I thought it was just dramatic enough, I absolutely adored how you described the kiss, everything was perfect. Don't change it. I mean ...

You're losing your memory. That's a terrifying thought. None of the doctors know why, they just whisper and cast you pitying glances. You haven't told your family yet. God, and ...

I'm getting sick of telling you how perfect it is. So I'll say it just one more time. It's perfect. The end. :) Ofir

I don't have much to say, just keep going. It was a really good chapter, you expressed Luke's emotions very clearly. I can't wait to read more! Just, did you ...

OMG! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I must read more! You have some mistakes, like extra commas and stuff, but I'm going to let the others get to that. First of all, the par

... tripped over my own feet and...

Thank you so much for your help!!! It means the world to me :D Letters [2] Cody, you ungrateful twerp! You were drunk! You were effing, freakin' drunk! I just ...

Ok, start with the bad, move on to the good: I thought Luke was kind of too calm. I mean, he's just worried? Shouldn't he feel more strongly about it? ...

Something is missing and I don't know what it is!!! Help? Letters Dear Cody, How's it going? Are you liking the new place? I bet it's great. Everyone talks about ...