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i forgot to add last time, it seems like she accepted her fate all too well. you don't just realize "oh, so he really isn't my brother, that person i ...

nice story!! cool version of cinderella! only, cinderela had a stepmother which hated her. you forgot about her shoe, she was supposed to loose a shoe right? and besides... I ...

okay, so i don't really know how this works. i'm going to put it here and we'll see from there. nobody ever really critesised me before because not many people ...

wow. that was so good! i love the way you write and describe! halfway through the story though I thought Tar was a guy. ^^ I was a bit dissapointed ...

it's awesome! I loved it! it's just... take the story to a place twilight hadn't okay? twilight is twilight. it is what it is. But this could be something new, ...

umm, hi, I'm sort of new here, what was that about, rating, I think, your own stories? I didn't fully understand, if you have a story that's not so appropriate ...