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I love it! N-i-c-e-! Way to go! Okay, so reviews now: umm, I think you should change the part about Sarah, the pretty blond. You could say, "Sarah, with a ...

I really really really liked it! Nice writting! Would you continue it? I always wanted to read a different version of twilight, just to see what it was like. This ...

This is very out of line for Harry's character. He wouldn't have done that. I think it's well written, but that's pretty much it. All the speaches and things, that's ...

More descriptions! That's what makes Artemis Fowl such a great book, in my opinion. Also, the whole book is written in irish english, this isn't really irish. As to the ...

I loved it!!! It's really really nice!!! Write more!!! Nice begining! Just, guys don't admit they like twilight, let alone hang up posters of them. How come Matt has it? ...

nice story! If you have more then I'll definetly read! A few things I noticed though: you did not describe the princess, I really would like to know what she ...

comments are apprecieted!It's just something I thought of right now, so it's not complete. I don't really like the begining and I have a lot of spelling mistakes, I'll fix ...

NICE. I really really like it!! okay, time for reviews! I personally think she should be in a little more pain when the guys find her, depending on how much ...

nice story! Are the couple always fighting, though? It was really good! Nice descriptions! I never really thought I'd enjoy reading about this kind of stories this much!! Nice way ...

i guess I'm sort of shocked... don't compare it with Twilight. This is just different. Why didn't you put the R thing on the title? I guess this is your ...

thanks! I editted it a bit according to your tips! It really helped!

few spelling mistakes but who in the world cares when you're working with talent such as yourself! I love this story!!! I love the way you write, I love the ...

OMG. I love it, love it, love it!!! This is amazing! *jaw falling open* it made me forget where I was, your descriptions are so good! It's so natural!! Keep ...

Nice story! I really liked it!! If you write more than I'll read! Only.... are you trying to make the main character to be so typical? I mean, she sounds ...

Hey, me again, thanks for before! but, umm, when you put another chapter, do you have to open a new topic? or do you just change it? i don't really ...