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As it happens some of these are my favorite books. The Night Watch [see the entire series. It's amazing. has werewolf in it I think, but it's also futuristic and ...

Prologue and chapter 1 - don't worry, it's rather short. Enchantment Prologue A thousand tiny daggers stabbed at my throat. Not again, I thought in despair. Please, just not again. ...

I love it! It's interesting and it makes me want to read more, which is what a prologue must do. It was very very short, so there is not much ...

So, this was fine. It didn't wow me because it was a bit strange. I don't know how the gaurdian angel got there in the first place, a little more ...

Hello, so, I'm not very whole with this piece, and I hope I could improve it in the future. Thanks^ ^. [Romance fantasy. Sort of.] Enjoy! Grace was never a ...

I think you should work on a certain code of behavior amongst them. Like how they can't get into fights on the ship so they won't be missing hands, how ...

I guess Griffin, Phinix [you know, the one the old Egyptians believed in] Phoenix [you said you wanted animals, right?] Centaur Pegasus Umm, that's all I can come up with ...

I simply can't decide. I thought at first about North Dakota, but it freaks me out to know there are so many options in there too, and then there's the ...

You are talented. Honestly. You described it all perfectly, and I have to say, knowing my mom, she would have said the same thing. You thought like a mother, you ...

Hello. So, just so you know, every bit of this is true. Maybe expect for the Ogre part - my dad never really agreed with me on that one ^ ...

It was very. very well done. You had my attention at the title, and then at the first line, and then I got sucked into it all. Like someone here ...

It sounded a bit confused to me, see he says he doesn't want to die because he still has her will to carry on, then kills himself. Without waiting you ...

I love it! It's so sad, and so bound to happen! Please, please, oh please, let that girl and Travis be together so this idiot over here could steal her! ...

I disagree with KevinL. For us who saw that show [it was a very,very good show] the background story is clear. It's lovely. I never really thought of the two ...

It was cute. Indid clice-ish, but cute. I never expected the boyfriend thing. Maybe you should learn more about the reactions people usually have to that, it could help. It ...