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This was wonderful. I really like this kind of writing, and your style in general. Very good, in my eyes. There was a certain point where I felt it was ...

I normally don't read scripts - but this was compltetly awesome. It made me laugh - I actually had to hide my face so people around wouldn't see, pretend to ...

I usually don't review many poems, but this caught my eye, so forgive me if it's not very helpful. I liked the way you show different sides of "deserts" as ...

Not so sure about the name, if you have any suggestions, please tell me! Thanks for reading, any review would be welcomed. Please tear it to shreds! Thanks, Ofir. P.S. ...

This was really very interesting. I liked the concept so far, and I do believe we're getting a glimpse iof your character. The only thing htat confused me was if ...

You asked to rip it to shreds, so... I thought it was a bit lacking in descriptions. We do not know what our MC looks like, and we don't hear ...

I felt that all the descriptions about how he "positioned himself" was a bit unnecessary, after all, your intended audience is teens right? I don't think this would be a ...

Hey, long time since I heard from you! Now, let's begin. The first scene, in my mind, was really under described. I didn't hear how Rose looked, how the adviser ...

Hey! Okay, so I was thinking that a little bit of it was unclear. You were trying for the whole, two things happening at once, one in her imagination\back of ...

Okay, I cracked at the twilight stuff. Way to go! I am a little bit confused... I thought the introduction was suggesting a very short but strong relationship that was ...

I love it. There was a little too much dialoge, should be replaced with descriptions or filled with pauses, but I think I understand Rose better now. One thing that ...

I liked it!!! It felt like it ended too soon, like there was no "punch line" to the end. Now that that's out of the way... Oki doki, reviewing time! ...

Harry Potter, definitley. The supernaturalist Uglies The Princess Bride I hate to admit this but, The Night Watch, was pretty damn good, no matter how much I hate the second ...

I'd have to say Witch Season. I found the descriptions depthless, the characters boring, and the plot absolutely dreadful. Who's with me?

Definitely: The Princess Bride! It's one of the best books for romance, in my mind, plus it'a a classic that you can't go without. There's also The Secret Circle, if ...