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I just really wanted to stop by and say that this is amazing, and that I now want to read the book. Exactly what cover art should do, so really, ...

I just wanted to tell you how much I love this. I love how you insert random bits - they are the best! Like the whole handstand thing. I love ...

Wow, beautiful picture! As already mentioned, the editing was very good! I love the colors, and the whole tone you gave this piece.. sort of dusky, yet not exactly. Very ...

Okay, so the first one is very interesting! It's nice that you took a picture of something that's out of the ordinary - at least for me. I mean, that ...

Please help me with this! Was it descriptive enough? Did my MC's emotions get through? And, the most important thing, was it good? It's my first time writing something with ...

I agree with theCodex about the "you can never be done" sounding a bit awkward, so you might want to consider changing that one - but other than that, I ...

Love it, love it, love it!!! It was so funny (and true)! Good job with this one. You definitely made a laugh out of something that's daily and\or annoying. I ...

She was like a little princess, that's what everyone would say Mom and Dad and Grandma, too but whatever, that's okay. She was the ballerina of us two, nimble and ...

In my dream, everything was calm. The wind weaved musically between the tall yellow grass, and the grey sky sprinkled with swirling cotton clouds went on forever. I touched my ...

You have the palest skin that I have ever seen; smooth, flawless skin, clinging to the inside of my palms as I hold you with shaking hands. Your veins are ...

Ever since I was introduced to YWS, I feel that I have evolved so much in my writing! It has been a huge help, and I appreciate it so much!But ...

I love this! It was so pure... I felt like I was looking at this poem, or maybe even the girl speaking, through clear and cold spring water - you ...

This is so cute! I'm not actually writing a review right now, I'm just telling you it's perfect, funny, tasteful and awesome!!! :) Keep up the good work!!!

I'm angry with you, angry as hell I sort of wonder if you can even tell One minute you were up so high, but oh, how you fell So you ...

He's a thirty four year old child, or so his wife would scream at the top of her lungs, tears dripping from her eyes, black tears, filled with makeup and ...