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I LIKE THIS SO MUCH. There, said it. Now that that's out of the way... I don't have any real critique for you. This was plainly awesome, in my mind. ...

This was interesting. Rather confusing, too. The first part reminded me of a birthday, and then when the MC notices things, I realized it was a baby, learning about the ...

The end gave me goosebumps. It's a... nice short story - creepy, indeed. But I thought it was a bit too obvious at times, such as, "Just let me be ...

As long as you make sure this isn't even more cliche... then I suppose it's all right. There's not much development in the plot in this chapter, except that Serena ...

I read it while laughing. I like it. It's not ordinary - there are no descriptions, as you might have noticed :) - but it was very good, in my ...

Hi there! First off, I really like your pic. I have the same goal :D Let's start with me liking it. I mean, really, really liking it. It's very good ...

It was a Christmas day in 1998 I'm not a hundred percent sure about the date The stockings were hanged on that white Christmas day And the good and the ...

I liked it. I thought we [the readers] didn't get to know the MC enough, but then, we're going to see more of her and it's just the begining, so ...

I really love this! I don't know much about photography, but all of these pictures look amazing to me. One of my favorite was the one with the brances, I ...

This was just great! I absolutely loved it! It had a nice flow to it, the descriptions were lively enough for this point of view, and we [the readers] got ...

Awesome. It was different, and very interesting, the plot was great too. I really like your writing1 I got to feel the MC through his thoughts [he's unintentionally funny!] and ...

It was.... a bit over the top but very funny indeed. I really really liked the part he rambles on, especially about Esme ["I mean, what is that about ?"]I ...

Fixed already pointed out the parts that don't fit in, so I don't have to do that - on to the poem itself, then. I loved it. I generally love ...

I wrote this a while ago but now I'm continuing it. Alternative title is "Speaking is Beautiful". It's rather short. Thanks for reading! Every comment will be appreciated. Prologue Speaking ...

You did have some spelling mistakes, almost all of them including "to". I think you meant "too". It was short - so it can't be considered a chapter. However, I ...