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I just wanted to point out that you have to define the audience you want for this book, age wise [I guess younger people would take more time adjusting to ...

"Sometimes it's better being alone," you murmur in the thick silence that's laced through the air. "What do you mean?" I turn around in the bed, half unwillingly, because the ...

I had to read this a few times, both ways, to really be able to get it. Now I feel like crying. So I logged on especially to comment and ...

I don't know when it started; Probably some cold, water-colored dawn Hidden away between sheets and sheets Of sharp lines and tear-drops. I don't know what kept it going until ...

I think about you every night before I go to sleep. I imagine your stubble tickling my chin, remember the way you used to whisper into my ear, picture your ...

Wow... I wasn't entirely certain what I thought about this piece until the finishing lines. The last line especially sort of tied the knot in my mind and made it ...

Thank you so much for the Feature! It means the world to me to hear how much you liked it, and how it moved you. Thank you so much! :D ...

I LOVE THIS!!! I've never thought about it this way... It was really original! The rhyme scheme is perfect! It's such a cute little thing! Well done! It's not much ...

The Hatter spreads some butter On the toast in his hand. "Terribly sorry," he mutters, "The jam is awfully bland." "That's alright," I reply, sipping my tea "Jam is just ...

Alright, so I'm going to be of absolutely no use to you and just keep rambling on and on about how much I love this. I think, with all honestly, ...

I really like this! The first two lines were my favorite, because of the imageries. I even clicked like! The one thing that bugs me, is the ending. "Doing what ...

I just wanted to tell you how much I loved this. It was a very touching piece, and I wanted to tell you well done! This isn't really a review, ...

This was good! I felt a lot of things while reading this piece... In the end, though, I was somewhat... scared. I don't know why exactly - for some reason, ...

The sun is bright behind the glass window and I have to crinkle my eyes against its glare. It's beautiful, of course, but like most beautiful things, you may not ...

This isn't going to be much of a review, just praise. I love the colors, the zoom in was unique and very well done, the whole thing is beautiful, and ...