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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Tree of deceit

    The metaphor here is beautiful! I absolutely love the rising tree of despair; it's beautiful, heartbreaking imagery. I honestly have little to say about it, because everyone else has pointed ...

    May 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Terror. The prologue.

    Hey, this is octocoffee. My input is quite long, so I hope it amounts to something for you. It was very late and the entire house lay in darkness. The ...

    May 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled

    Hey! This is my first review, so please forgive me if you don't find it quite helpful. In general, I find the second person very weak. It's a little confusing ...

    May 17, 2009


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