octocoffee

Through the graveyard I walk alone, No one stands by my side. I stop by a crumbling grave, My eyes cry my heart's remains. The rhythm here feels strange. In ...

Hi! I’m octo, and I noticed some things you might want to take a look at. As Galerius mentioned, this writing is very stagnant. There’s no variation, so there is ...

Thank you for writing this. As Mars said, it was an enlightening piece, thought-provoking and poignant. The writing style is straightforward and honest, and I appreciate it for that. Self-image ...

Wow, what a lovely piece. I think your introduction is so strong and vibrant, I was hooked in immediately. The haiku was an excellent wasy to end it as well. ...

Hey! I've got quite a bit to say, so I hope I don't bore you with my prodding. So let's go! It's a very simple poem. I feel like it ...

When you have the time, if you could review my poem, that'd be appreciated. Ripping it to shreds with criticism would be adored. Thanks! Resurrection, Inversed

Well, it's a serious romantic story inspired by a parody of a serious romantic story. Ha. So, I'm not a fan of Twilight. I felt like it failed when the ...

Oh, I completely understand what you mean. I usually have four word documents open at the same time, because my mind just jumps around from one to another. It's absolutely ...

The night closed down on us, I feel like the comma is unnecessary. as I felt his cool breath down my neck. It was an exhilarating feeling, Again, unnecessary comma. ...

Hey Ray! I'm octocoffee, and I thought I'd say a little something about your poem. So I'll start with the nitpicking, because I really can't leave any piece without nitpicking. ...

Hey, will this be published soon? If so, congratulations! There are a few things I'm a bit curious about though. In terms of writing style, I'm really glad that you ...

Congratulations Evi! Just as Mini Moon is the best, so are you! Thanks for being so welcoming.

Alrighty, I'm not sure if this is considered bumping, but I separated the piece into sections and added and edited some places. Hopefully the message is a little clearer this ...

Hey, nice to see that you made some changes to the poem! First of all, I do like that you extended the poem, it sounds great now. I'm glad that ...

Wow, this was great, absolutely fantastic. I'm octocoffee by the way, nice to meet you. But as mentioned, spelling and grammar were impeccable. I'm terribly jealous of your skills. The ...