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Falling Below Zero - Chapter 1 I never thought that two lives would change so suddenly simply because one girl wore pants. It was July, possibly the hottest and worst ...

Hey hen.hug! First of all, thank you for replying to my thread. I hope you find my review helpful, and forgive me if I come off as severe, it's just ...

Hey again Maki-chan! Sorry this one took a bit longer, I had work to do and whatnot in ‘real life’. Anyway, let’s go! (Oh, and about your response. If the ...

Konbanwa, Maki-chan! Hajimemashite. Ima, iku yo! (Ignore my silly Japanese. I’m a beginner, so I don’t know too much xD) “I am going to ask you a few simple questions ...

Would you mind reviewing mine? It's Historical Fiction. Meimei and the Emperor

So, why am I doing this? I have free time, finally! I need to get on YWS more often. I need to read more. I would like to improve my ...

Hi RainWanderer! So usually I quote and correct, but your story is quite long so I couldn't. I'll try to point out the main things and let you go through ...

A Time for Dancing by Davida Wills Hurwin. I ended up sobbing after that one, but it's been quite a while since I've read it. I am Mordred was also ...

Before we start, I think you might want to slap an ‘R’ rating on here with a warning. Many young people frequent this forum, and some don’t like reading about ...

Hey ShaydeDesiree! For the most part, your spelling and grammar is great! But here's what I thought could be changed: Because it is not a “proper” name, they call me ...

Wow, this is great. I just have a few questions, I hope you don't mind. They're just tiny, miniscule things, really. The whole town was silent beside it, like children ...

Chen Yu furrowed his brows, all but entranced by his sister’s performance. But every other member of the Chinese Imperial Court latched their eyes onto her movements, unable to look ...

Well, I'll definitely agree that you guys are right, we can't say for sure that she is untalented because her filmography is very limited. So I'm taking back that statement. ...

She's never going to be the actress Angelina Jolie is, that's for sure. I'll admit Megan Fox has an enviable figure, but her face isn't anything extraordinary, really. Plus I ...

Hey Mechi! Sorry about the lateness, but I’m here now! So, here we go. I look up. Cool air overwhelms me. The beach disappears, but the navy eyes remain. It ...