octocoffee

Lane after lane, of the same blue tent; positioned securely, tied to the ground. The thick blue air bed, Fills each waterproof head. The same white guide wires, Tie it ...

Hey silented1! Hope you don’t mind if I go over this. Well, you asked for more reviews, so I’m happy to help out. If you liked the way I reviewed ...

ButterFlyInk's review has been finished! Starting tomorrow until Sunday, expect slower responses. I have a volleyball camp to attend, so I won't be home much. If there are requests, I ...

Hi ButterflyInk! I love your username, I think it’s very pretty. Thank you for replying to my thread, I hope you find this useful. Bickazer has already covered the bases, ...

Misplaced inflections twisted our psyche, our flocks of Faith to hordes of Paranoia; fragile pauses shattered under scrutiny, piercing Joyous plains, carving canyons of Despair. Insistence and Denial

First of all, I think your poem would really benefit from punctuation. I recently read this fantastic article (because I tend to do the same thing when I attempt poetry) ...

Hi KayWurdz! I’m octo, nice to meet you. Just to start off, I like the title for this poem. It’s quirky and interesting. So now let’s dive into the actual ...

Woo. Hmm. Worst books I've ever read... Twilight by Stephanie Meyer - The writing is all purple prose, but what really bothered me was the lack of interesting characters and ...

Finished within ten hours! xD Actually, I had to do other things today, so that's why. Would anyone else like a review?

Hey! Thanks for replying to my thread. I hope you find this review helpful :) Isis tripped out of the doorway and jogged down the driveway, glancing both ways before ...

Hey fading-dream! This is an interesting poem :) If you don’t mind, I’m going to separate this into couplets and point out things that could be improved. Amongst the crowd, ...

If you would review mine, that would be greatly appreciated. :D It's Historical Fiction, set in China. Meimei and the Emperor

Hi! I’m octocoffee, nice to meet you. I’d like to review your work :) So! Let’s go, shall we? My soul and heart dance in harmony to the sound of ...

Reviews have been finished for both Maki-chan and hen.hug! If anyone else wants a review, just drop a line here. :D

Eli Danson and Hino (LAST NAME), an import from the Japanese national team, were the first to the center line. Why do you need the ‘(LAST NAME)’ there? Just to ...