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  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Down For A Week: What Will You Do?

    I plan on punishing myself and staying away from YWS. I need to finish up a few short stories, so that will be an opportune time to get them done. ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    I feel super dorky putting these up, but... My hair is the same length in both, it just looks longer in the second photo. I usually wear glasses, just so ...

    Aug 3, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: [Open] octo's got some free time...

    Actually, I'm a newbie too :) -high fives- Personally, just the fact that you said thank you made me feel all fluffy inside. If you ever need another review, just ...

    Aug 1, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: [Open] octo's got some free time...

    roon's lovely poems have been reviewed :) -crosses it off the to-do list-

    Jul 31, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Some short poems (Edited)

    Hey roon! Thanks for replying to my thread! If you have any problems with anything I’ve said (if I’m unclear or offensive), don’t hesitate to tell me :) Anyway, let’s ...

    Jul 31, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Can't Tell Daddy

    Hey Rachel! I'm here to review this piece. I tend to get very wordy, so forgive the length. And now I spoke of another harangue, once again finding myself sitting ...

    Jul 30, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: [Open] octo's got some free time...

    (Mr_Bacon and I are signature buddies. Yay.) The review has been finished :) My plate is currently clear.

    Jul 30, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Why Do Hospitals Smell Funny?

    Hey! Thanks for replying to my thread. I hope you find things in here that help out a bit. So, let’s begin. Why do hospitals smell funny? I wonder. I ...

    Jul 30, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: [Open] octo's got some free time...

    Review has been completed, finally! Now I'm back on regular schedule, so any requests will be fulfilled ASAP. Any takers?

    Jul 29, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Another Day

    Hey! Sorry for the wait, but I'm here now :) So, let's get started. I'm not very experienced with reviewing lyrics, but here's what I can scrounge together. To start ...

    Jul 29, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Meimei and the Emperor

    Well, thank you for reviewing and saying you liked it! There won't be any more at the moment, until I feel more comfortable with writing in a formal tone while ...

    Jul 28, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: [Open] octo's got some free time...

    I definitely do lyics! Sadly, I won't be able to attend to it until Monday. Volleyball camp is way more intense than I first expected! (I did nine suicides/ladders/running lines ...

    Jul 26, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Blood

    Hey Rosey! I’m here and ready to review. I ran up the steps, pulling an arrow from my quiver as I went. What an exciting introduction! It’s excellent, grabbing my ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Voices

    Hey, Kath! I’m assuming that’s your name from your signature. I’m octocoffee, nice to meet you! I’m sure you already know, but you might need a reminder: The 2:1 ratio! ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: (Mis)communiqué

    Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I do agree that the similes feel pretty heavy, but I'm not sure how to fix it.

    Jul 23, 2009


That smells like the inside of a tropical rainforest.
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