octocoffee

Hey Kaitelyn! I'm octocoffee, nice to meet you. You've written an interesting beginning to a story, so I thought I might show my interest by reviewing. I tend to get ...

I will definitely agree with Bickazer and Master_Yoda. Speaker of the Dead is wonderful, clearly better than Ender's Game. Ender's Game certainly feels like a set-up, and the two should ...

Hey there! You wrote a lovely piece, I found it very true and made me think about myself for a bit. Ironically, I'm going to point out 'flaws' in this ...

Hey Megan! I'm octocoffee, nice to meet you. So, I thought it was a very cute and sweet poem. However, I have a few things I'd like to point out. ...

Thank you muunilist for the critique! I found it very helpful. I do agree, the middle does seem very jumbled and I can certainly see where the reader would become ...

Hey mechi! Welcome to the forum; I'm new as well :D Anyway, let's get started, shall we? First of all, is the title really "Another Teen Pregnancy Story"? Just a ...

Symbol

Resurrection, Inversed I smile as I step into that endless fall prepared for nothing expecting everything and hoping always hoping that I can one day see a picture larger than ...

Hey! Nice job, it's very sweet. There's just a few things I have to say. First of all, I think as long as you stick with one, consistent format throughout ...

Latin

Yay! I adore Greek myths; that's a really great prompt. You did a great job with this. Pasiphae is definitely a neglected character and it's great you chose to broaden ...

I hope you don't mind that I'm reviewing this a month after it was put up. I'm new, so... I adore this, I really do. This is coming from someone ...

Alright, thanks for the recommendation! I had a feeling it wasn't R, it's just borderline unsettling. Thanks M, as well! Being welcomed to forums always feels nice. As for the ...

Thanks for the welcome! Coffee is definitely an alright nickname. Speaking of which, some cafe au lait sounds great right now. I've just decided to remove all inhibitions and just ...

The metaphor here is beautiful! I absolutely love the rising tree of despair; it's beautiful, heartbreaking imagery. I honestly have little to say about it, because everyone else has pointed ...