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I reviewed Flower~Child's lovely love poem :) Anyone else?

Hey Flower~Child! Long time no see! It's fantastic to see that you've been writing all this time, and it's been a while but I can tell your work has progressed ...

Thank you guys for the suggestions and feedback!

Hey, thanks for letting me review your piece! Would you mind reviewing my latest poem? Come Together, Vietnam

Alrighty, I reviewed Emmzziee's and stelagineva's works to the best of my ability :) I hope those worked out okay for you guys. Anyone else?

They eat away at my soul and scream; whisper; mutter; die... I think you should switch from semicolons to commas here. Semicolons create strange, awkward stops that doesn't work well ...

First off, I think that this a great prologue/introduction. Rather than just taking the beginning of a story and just calling it a “prologue”, we see that the novel to ...

My goodness, I haven't been around in ages! My apologies! I'm going to make an attempt to review at least one piece per week, since I've been so busy I ...

The mountain children murmur into the ripples, as their mother paints your visage on festival paper. Lotus rafts in the current, pink and feather small, careen in the dips of ...

Hi! I'm octo! I don't have quite a lot of time at the moment, but I wanted to stop by quickly and give you a review! The title kind of ...

I attempted a story a while back about a girl who becomes insane (due to supernatural influences, but that's neither here nor there). First of all, it very much depends ...

To add in some more input, I'm from the Southwest, Four Corners area. We pick up a little of the Californian dialect and mash it up with the Texan one ...

I. Nitpicks “Oh.” She sighed. Usually, with these sorts of dialogue tags, there’s a comma rather than a period after ‘Oh’. “Thank you for dinner,” I asked. Doesn’t look like ...

I owe these a more proper review, but at the time, I'd like to say that your writing only grows more beautiful with the passing of time. You've always got ...

Hullo, hullo! As I remember from the chat room, you wanted some reviews for this, so I decided to take up the challenge! I'm glad I did, as it's really ...