oceans

Hi LittleLee! This is a beautiful poem, and you sound very experienced. It reminds me very much of poets such as William Blake, the kind that transfer you to the ...

Thanks for your input!

Thank you for your input, it is appreciated! Yes, when it comes to line breaks I need a lot of work! I acknowledge that, my professor points it out often ...

I appreciate your input! Thank you! You are right, it could be "enveloping", however, I think in this circumstance it could be either or!