ocean_soul13

I really like the story idea! I can see why Chase doesn't like Randy, Randy is acting like a big huge jerk. My only thing to say is making sure ...

Hi! I'll be reviewing for you today and I hope I can help out a bit. First, this poem is rather short. It's always hard to review a meaningful poem ...

There must be some easier way to say these words, but no matter what I try and say, the wrong thing might be heard. I wish I could be there ...

“Lyra? Lyra! Oh c’mon, wake up!” I heard someone screaming and felt something shaking me on my shoulders. I opened my eyes suddenly and saw Quile directly above me. “Oh ...

Well, you know me for telling you what is wrong and what is right. But this tiime, I'll give you some tips! Can't go wrong with that. 1. When writing ...

Hey Suzy!! Just came to read your poem! First things first, I know other reviews said the same but oh well, make sure your punctuation marks are correct. It gets ...

As soon as I turned, I saw someone who I never expected to see. My first thought was "are you a friend or foe to me" but I instantly shook ...

Some of this reminds me of how we were talking just the other night, lol. Anyways, it's interesting of how much you can imagine through a single script. It is ...

As I'm going through to edit this, my only concern is to help me with sentence structures. Sometimes I can't tell if my sentence flows and if words should be ...

Good job, Kendall!! I like the fact you use just enough detail to get a picture going in my head. The krelt is still freaking me out a bit, but ...

Hey Merana! Lol, I like saying that! OH YEAH! Merana and Cayden are here!! WOOT! Yeah, I'm kinda....crazy right now but oh well! Monday is officially OVER! See you tomorrow!

I always have this strange feeling when he's next to me, But he doesn't always see who I am, what I feel, or what I want to be. He's there ...