observandox

i really enjoyed reading your work, its a kind of piece that's easy to relate too, and the flow was effortless. in the shimmering lights I melt, For they stir ...

i can't help you with punctuation or grammar, but i did like your piece, its one that was easy to understand and it did flow. Hope shot down by lightning, ...

Even under a shit sky, if there ever was one If there ever is one to me, it didn't flow right. takes me back to those fat hot nights I'm ...