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Another good piece.

For a guy who said poetry isn't his thing, your pretty good at it... this one is really good. I too, like the imagnation (My body leaving me to dance, ...

I think it's really good.

I've been through something like this but with a really close old friend, he's gone from my life now... the poem has meaning and I love it and it also ...

I really like this, and its really good for a newbie, I sucked on my first one which was a poem... anyway enough about that. This is good work kid, ...

Really good young miss, I know the feeling. No-one ever notices... Thats all I've got to say.

...GONE... As the tear's of love roll down my cheeks, the wind howl's at the mid-night moon as if you are still here. The rain patters down upon my cheeks ...

HE LOVES HER Every line on her face, outlined with fine texture. Every line a sign of her life, fulled with happiness and yet she's sad. Her tall curved body ...