nutmegan595

I think you should submit these all separately or at least use something to separate them better. You have great ideas for your poems and can write some good lyrics, ...

That was so cool. At first I was thinking that it was something mythological and then it got confusing with modern stuff mentioned. It made so much sense, though, when ...

I see this for a contest, so was it just about describing what someone saw in the mirror? If it was, awesome job! I really get what the man wants. ...

I think the poetry and story is good. Without hearing the music I can't be sure, but it seems like you have sort of an Evanescence style--check out My Immortal. ...

This was a really good story idea, but I think are better ways you could do it. It should be sad and heartwrenching. I didn't get that, however, because the ...

OHMYGOD! I just have to say that now. This story was great. It was confusing--but that works since Elina is confused--and enthrawling and the writing was great. I hope that ...

You need to go through the story again and check grammar or just spacing errors. I think the events were good to start a story, but you need to develop ...

After the first part, I liked the story. You did a good job setting up the charaters. But that beginning was too much information and not introduced in the right ...

This is interesting. It's very short so I would like to read more. As someone else said, this would be really good as a memory within a bigger story. Nice ...