nutmegan595

Death came to me like the wind. Lights and sounds blared all around me, so at first I didn’t even realize He was there. He came up behind me and ...

That was so cool. At first I was thinking that it was something mythological and then it got confusing with modern stuff mentioned. It made so much sense, though, when ...

I see this for a contest, so was it just about describing what someone saw in the mirror? If it was, awesome job! I really get what the man wants. ...

I think the poetry and story is good. Without hearing the music I can't be sure, but it seems like you have sort of an Evanescence style--check out My Immortal. ...

Prologue Though it was the middle of the night, the sky outside was slowly turning blood red. The moon had begun to darken, and would soon be pitch black. Annaleise ...

This was a really good story idea, but I think are better ways you could do it. It should be sad and heartwrenching. I didn't get that, however, because the ...

The one I have on here is about vampires. My vampires appear completely human until just before their sixteenth birthday. Then they start changing to be nocturnal, drink blood, and ...

Hey everybody. Nutmegan595 here. Just saying hi and suggesting any fantasy/action readers go check out the first two chapters of my novel Mostly Human. I'd love comments and critiques and ...

OHMYGOD! I just have to say that now. This story was great. It was confusing--but that works since Elina is confused--and enthrawling and the writing was great. I hope that ...

Chapter Two: We all have our talents—even if some of them aren’t real. A tall, blonde woman walked into the library and pulled a few books off the shelves. Gabriela ...

You need to go through the story again and check grammar or just spacing errors. I think the events were good to start a story, but you need to develop ...

After the first part, I liked the story. You did a good job setting up the charaters. But that beginning was too much information and not introduced in the right ...

This is interesting. It's very short so I would like to read more. As someone else said, this would be really good as a memory within a bigger story. Nice ...

Chapter One: When you’re a vampire with insomnia what else is there to do but go for a joyride? I leaned against the railing of the balcony when Fletcher came ...