nouveaux_jours

The lonely ghost Sings so beautifully I love that. My favorite two lines in a piece that I liked very much overall. I really enjoy seeing this kind of thought ...

(Ach, I'm such a lazy critic.) I apologize in advance for the general-ness of what follows. I just really want to say that I love the use of italics throughout ...

head lolling hands bloody napalm-colored eyes too wide, she falters face in the mud: and hands will pick her up, boots from underneath will kick her skyward; in she breathes ...

Hmm. Okay, the thing about haiku: you have seventeen syllables. Yeah, duh, you know that, but my point is that you don't have a lot of space. Haiku typically deal ...

Several things. First of all, this is a really interesting poem, especially in the movements it describes. I like the memories that "drift" and "float" like butterflies. The impression I ...