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Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 2: The City of Scott
WOW. I didn't expect my writing to have such an effect on people. Thank you so much for your multitude of compliments. Appreciation really does help to motivate you when ...
Dec 17, 2015 -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 2: The City of Scott
Thank you so much for reading through both of these and for all the compliments! I will be uploading the 3rd chapter shortly, and I will notify you when I ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy
Thank you so much for the detailed criticism and compliments. Both are appreciated greatly, as it is easy to lose motivation to write when a) you are unsure if you're ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy
Thank you so much for the input and the kind words! I was unsure as to how to represent the thoughts of the character, but I see now that italics ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Everyone faces me
Oh I thought you were trying to use the perspective of Death to impart a gloom-and-doom worldview. My bad for assuming.
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 2: The City of Scott
Thank you!
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy
Hello! I recently revised this work with your input in mind, and I was wondering if you could take a second and see if it's any better for it. If ...
Nov 26, 2015 -
Re: The Cruelty of Women
Ok, I'll be sure to check out some of your other stuff.
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy
Hello! Thank you for spending the time to read my little doo-dad! I greatly appreciate it whenever someone goes to the effort of reading my work. Now onto the contents ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy
Thank you for the very in-depth input! You provided 3 very valid points. All three I've considered during the writing, but couldn't decide how they would impact a reader. Repetition ...
Oct 25, 2015
