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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 2: The City of Scott

    WOW. I didn't expect my writing to have such an effect on people. Thank you so much for your multitude of compliments. Appreciation really does help to motivate you when ...

    Dec 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 2: The City of Scott

    Thank you so much for reading through both of these and for all the compliments! I will be uploading the 3rd chapter shortly, and I will notify you when I ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy

    Thank you so much for the detailed criticism and compliments. Both are appreciated greatly, as it is easy to lose motivation to write when a) you are unsure if you're ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy

    Thank you so much for the input and the kind words! I was unsure as to how to represent the thoughts of the character, but I see now that italics ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Culture, Spiritual Re: Everyone faces me

    Oh I thought you were trying to use the perspective of Death to impart a gloom-and-doom worldview. My bad for assuming.

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 2: The City of Scott

    Thank you!

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy

    Hello! I recently revised this work with your input in mind, and I was wondering if you could take a second and see if it's any better for it. If ...

    Nov 26, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Cruelty of Women

    Ok, I'll be sure to check out some of your other stuff.

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy

    Hello! Thank you for spending the time to read my little doo-dad! I greatly appreciate it whenever someone goes to the effort of reading my work. Now onto the contents ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy

    Thank you for the very in-depth input! You provided 3 very valid points. All three I've considered during the writing, but couldn't decide how they would impact a reader. Repetition ...

    Oct 25, 2015


In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening