northernsword

Nice, if short. The setting's interesting so far, though, and the hints at some odd traditions help with the... suspense? I dunno the exact word I'm looking for. Anyway... Most ...

Well, what you have here is, as you said, just info on all the main characters. While I suppose a prologue can be used to set up a story by ...

Hey, nice story. The writing's really well done, and I particularly like the short intros you put at the start of the chapters/segments/whatever you call them. I suppose grammar's mostly ...