northernsword

Prologue: How It Was Back Then It was summer and, naturally, the sun was out in full force. The clouds were in strong ranks as well, though, their white bodies ...

Nice, if short. The setting's interesting so far, though, and the hints at some odd traditions help with the... suspense? I dunno the exact word I'm looking for. Anyway... Most ...

Well, what you have here is, as you said, just info on all the main characters. While I suppose a prologue can be used to set up a story by ...

Hey, nice story. The writing's really well done, and I particularly like the short intros you put at the start of the chapters/segments/whatever you call them. I suppose grammar's mostly ...