norris_redford

I picked the first book up for my 11 year old cousin for the holidays. As I looked through it at home, I was surprised that I found it very ...

I read the first and thought it was fairly amusing. Then I read the second, and just got tired of it. I hate to say this, but I think any ...

I believe that Interview With the Vampire was the best book of the series. I wish she would have just stopped there. After the Body Thief, I just couldn't continue. ...

Does anyone else here also enjoy books that are for readers younger than you? I happen to love the A Series of Unfortunate Events collection, as well as The Edge ...

The fact that a piece of literature can be banned from a school is both disturbing and disgusting. Fahrenheit 451 is challenged, and it is about censorship. How ironic is ...

Yes, that was written a year and a half ago, and after reading back over it I realized it was too detailed. I wanted to see, however, if it was ...

You could make the very beggining of this more interesting by having the start of the scene very peaceful, and then having Shantar bursting into the scene looking a bit ...

For being new at it, he is very good. You might want to work with him, however, on sentence starters. I know he is new to it, but it is ...

I think you could really heighten the interest level if you made the death speach a little more indepth. Allowing the father to talk more will bring out his character ...

Welcome welcome welcome! I am new myself, but I hope you enjoy your stay here as much as I have for the entire day and half I have been a ...

There I was…again…crouched on the floor, in the same old alleyway, surrounded by the same old monsters. I would consider revising this a bit. Although it is a powerful beginning, ...

Sorry. Taking the Kiln chapters off on all the sites they have been posted to. Publishers won't take a story if it's online already.

I find this forum very interesting and fresh, especially the use of sticky notes... :D There is currently a story being recorded which is entitled 'Kiln.' I am very proud ...