norris_redford

Hello there and welcome. I know what you mean by the deterioration of other forums... SCN was like that. Just horrible. I garuntee you will not be disapointed here. Although, ...

Abarat... I picked that one up in the the bookstore. Turned it over in my hands a few times. Read the back and inside. Smelled it (don't ask, it's what ...

Not a problem. I belong to as well, and I was actually surprised that the reviews and critiques here weren't as I was used to. Line by line critiques there ...

I have less points than most of the newer members (I am new myself anyway) because I am not very good at critiquing poetry, and so I don't do it. ...

I once belonged to a forum (not , either, a different one, for those of you who know me from there) that told me to take out almost all of ...

One problem. Editors really aren't that stupid. A good editor is so known in his profession he/she will just toss that sort of thing aside. They want to read your ...

I have to agree about the Jim Carrey thing, I don't think he should have been used as Count Olaf either, but the movie itself looks alright. I'm only on ...

Of course this is fake, otherwise the autoresponse would have come up long before she said it did. This was done very well. There is nothing really to correct, as ...

I think tribe's men is supposed to be one word, but I'm not exactly sure. Tribesmen? Not as brittle as a humans There should be an apostrophe in humans. The ...

the stout, grey haired Capitan eyed the map warily. This should be made into another sentence, instead of having it at the end of his dialog. Or you could just ...

He draws them out? I didn't think so. I sort of like the way he has the books set up. The movie isn't out in the US until the 17th ...

I liked this one as well. Sort of funny that its on the banned/challenged list...

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I tried to read Charlie Bone and couldn't. I thought it was too like Harry Potter, and it wasn't detailed enough for me. It was okay, but not really my ...

There is just something about a repeated sound effect that really takes away from the writing for me... usually I try to just describe what they hear without actually 'showing ...