norm91

yeah I understand what you mean. But this was my entry in the "best ever death scene" competition. It was to not go over 700 words and we were told ...

It's interesting, I don't really have a clue what's going on... I'd read on to find out. Good work. Here goes mine, it's a paragraph and a half. In the ...

Prior to putting pen to paper (or finger to keyboard :lol: ) most authors do plan their work. I'm not naive to think it just flows and they're done in ...

Basically, the last few days I’ve been thinking up a potential novel/short-story (haven’t really decided yet. I’m really in the early stages of planning.) And I wanted to have your ...

:lol: Normy's fine.

I totally agree about Neville, and to a great extent the others, seeming emotionless and not filled with the grief they surely would have felt. One part of the plot ...

Is this the first part? For it seems really unfinished. It also doesn't seem to have much of a plot, to be perfectly frank.

My story is long, so I'll try and make it brief: A few days ago I finished reading a book, which I enjoyed, however, I felt that some bits weren't ...

Thanks for the nice welcome people. ;)

Thanks for the advice, you say it didn't seem rushed. But, I wrote it in like 20/30mins. So, I'm proud that it was well recieved. I'll review my punctuation before ...

I'm planning on writing a story about two "twin" worlds. One fictional, I have invented two cities already - Flanodice & Zareos. And our world, using cities like London, Manchester, ...

I listen to, mostly, rock and indie. The rock I listen to also includes classic, including AC/DC, Van Halen... & loads more.

Like I've said this is the first piece of fiction that I've attempted to write. I've not given thought to character development or anything - I'm good at that, regularly ...

That kept me very entertained.... and that's not an easy thing to do. Like many others have said it is certainly a unique concept. It was an interesting read and ...

To be perfectly honest, I don't enjoy reading poetry that much and as a novice that certainly wasn't terrible. Personally, you've not got enough suspense in it. In writing, I ...