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For those lost souls, Death is hardest on the forgotten. For those lost souls, Time of pain, and weeping floods. For those lost souls, Inexorable time ticks no more. For ...

I think I chose weep because it is slightly more unusual than just "tears" and will stand out more and therefore emphasis the grief a little bit more. Thank you ...

Thanks very much for the advice. I definately think you are right about the structure!!

Hey... was wondering (as this was my first piece of poetry ever written) if there was any more tips, or advice or just any other thoughts on my poem... Thanks!

I'm so sorry. It must be hard to miss someone you love.I can always be your friend here if you want. Anyway, I liked the poem. It was sweet. And ...

For everyone who has lost someone the loved. Death has been pretty evident in my life recently, and I just wanted to write something. This took less than a minute. ...

All these tips are some good ideas about how to conjure good ideas!! I have one that I am going to write in the summer, it basically is taken straight ...

title is subject to change (title and chapter) tell me what you think review me without holding back Chapter 2 – rain drops I distinctly heard the sound of rain ...

this is just a rough draft. I plan on changing many things, so don't judge it too hard =] (title is subject to change) Chapter 1 – hide and seek ...

Hello,PoeticGlow, I'm Des. Your poem was good. It gives readers a clear understanding of the enticing, temptation and indulges of cocaine. Does the part with "...the sweat runs down your ...

I've actually had a problem recently about not being able to express my feelings to this girl, a girl that I think is perfect! This poem was excellent, and one ...

For me it was Azkaban as well. It was such an interesting read and it is my favourite. However, they're all amazing!

The problem I encountered with my protagonist characters is that when they're faced with choices they tend to choose the right option all the time. This makes them unrealistic. When ...

I have finally written a piece that isn't bin worthy. I wouldn't say that.... it's not THAT good....... :lol: Just messing, I really liked this and it was well-writen and ...

Alright Poltergeist. I really enjoyed reading this, you've got a knack for descriptive writing. Just a few small areas for improvement: Khor heard crashes and bangs coming from somewhere in ...