noobcake666

Yay, action! :smt003 Once again, great story. However, once again, I saw errors in grammar and comma usage. Also, I felt that Tessa's death was a little rushed. "Tessa eyed ...

Hey Tiggs! :D Although it was kind of long, I liked this, especially the part about the arranged marriages. I mean, who doesn't love deception, lies, and overall drama? The ...

Although the idea has potential, I thought the story was rather "shallow"-it lacked detail and didn't really go deep into the plot. I didn't really think the ending was all ...

I like this. It was funny. :smt001 Although the devil seems a little too...I don't know, generous? I also liked how you ended this. It may be cruel, but nobody ...

Okay, this is my first time reviewing, so here it goes! First of all, I'd like to say that it's obvious that you put a ton of thought into this ...