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This poem uses great imagery and has a strong emotional story. What I don't like, though, is the usage of rhyme (intentional all want) on only a couple of lines ...

This is my first NaNoWriMo. For this year, I have taken a snippet of one of my old dust-collecting ideas and have added on to it for the plot. For ...

Behold I am Sanpdragon Silver Nostrils! Snapdragon is kind and caring. She is silver like the moonlight, and she dances in clouds of falling stars.

2. Matt I sat on the cold stone of a crumbling window ledge. I looked out onto the expanse of nothingness around me. I can just see the remains of ...

I wrote this in class when we were revising alliteration. Sing me such a dainty song and fill my heart with pride. Bellow quite a brilliant ballad and bring forth ...

For having 3 blog posts and three literary work posts.

Interesting. A good hook. Who is her father, and why did her mother sleep with her father? I scowled into his smoky green eyes. "I have been lending you money ...

jaetwee Not too hard.

jaetgswedde

Your first bit consists with my plan for chapter one, so I'm in!

You have written a nice little piece here. I like your portrayal of the afterlife, as well as your touch into religion. What I don't like is the fact that ...

6/10 Yay for freebies!

Agbatza (ug-butzah). "Agbatza!" she cried, realising she had left her maths homework at home, completely untouched from where she put it after getting it on monday. 'Butza (butzah) for short. ...

Granted but you never wake up. I wish the next person to post gets banned (maybe I should be on the ban the person above you thread).

When you haven't shut your computer down or closed your Internet browser or logged off YWS in over a month so you can have instant access to it 24/7. True ...