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Most Likely to be a Janitor: Bolt YWS Clown: Charlie II Most Spirited: Most Chatty: TheEstimableEelz (Ily) Most Likely to End Up on a Deserted Island: Most Likely to Get ...

Kyllorac's green with the gradient actually looks rather nice. The current green feels a bit washed-out

To encourage myself to work on this story more, I am posting this novel here. 1. Magic School Tara closed her eyes and inhaled, her brow creased in concentration. She ...

Faith: I drive up to a stop light I have faith my brakes will work when it turns red. I sit on a chair I have faith it will hold ...

Wait till the clubs are back up. I have a whole rant that disproves/mollifies/WMD's/maybe even slightly insults the Xtians rant.

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I d pull them back and try to distract them and slowly walk them away because shouting something out might scare them into jumping.

A good way to fit in the different POV's is to divide your story into parts and have the POV change in the new part.

I'm loving quick reply. No points = post as many works as you want. Still review though. Lot's of reviewing!

Just to let you know, this line pretty much invalidates your argument I don't care what scientists say. In the terms of the baby's possible future, what about the mothers? ...

I don't know if this has already been said because I'm too lazy to read through all 42 pages, but I think the options should be different because only really ...

There are more stars in the universe than grains of sand on Earth. In terms, we haven't even monitored and actively investigate a square millimetre worth of grains of sand, ...

Diversity in everything is good. It what pushes us forward. Scientific and religious history have all pointed towards that. Diversity in belief is what powered the Hebrew slaves into freedom. ...

I've been hearing about this story for ages now. I have been wanting to read it, but had never gotten around to it. So when I do finally start reading ...

I agree with AngelKnight. This poem is rather mild and half-hearted when based on a topic such as Katrina. I would recommend more emotional output. You have represented a scene ...