noninjaes

A beautiful poem with a sad touch in the story. I like your non-cheesy rhyming and your alternation between quadrants and couplets. It give the poem a nice feel. The ...

Definitely a lesson learned in that poem, but sees should be used instead of see's. Other than that, a good poem. I hope you win/won that contest. As well all ...

Short and funny. It sums up Chamber Of Secrets in less than 10 mins. But It would of been better with more detail.

A wonderful poem that brings forth the fact that love is an emotion that words can't convey. Short and simple but with a deeper meaning.

Reality is a bitch. Great story, keep writing.

Yes: My first novel that's ever gotten past the first chapter. I am working away at it at the moment. I have posted the first chapter to give people a ...

Its a work in progress. The second paragraph is a dream. It will make more sense in a later chapter.

My top 10: 1. My plush puppy dog. 2. My 3rd generation Kindle 3. My vast book collection. 4. My laptop. 5. My bed. 6. My Meditation scented candle from ...

Who says it needs to be good?

Granted, but you eat so much that you burst. I wish I don't exist (not part of the wish-not really but).

You get hatred and despise. -inserts emotions-

You get a piece of sewage flavored gum. -inserts foot-

No, what are you talking about?

Granted, you don't have to raise a finger because you now have none. I wish I had a donut.

The hardest part of writing a story is getting past that second chapter. A lot of people can write the first chapter with no problems, but when it comes to ...