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An interesting chapter. I like how it introduces some more information about the time watch. It helps open up more probabilities for the plot. I would of preferred a longer ...

What is the YWS SPEW?

I sat at my desk, staring blankly at my computer screen. Nothing, absolutely nothing to type up. No ideas floating around in my head to type up. What if I ...

Agent jaetwee|Western Front I swung through the treetops of the forest, swiftly swinging from branch to branch. I looked down towards the woodland floor, looking for signs of the people ...

Secret Agent jaetwee Russian Forces HQ-Moscow I walked through the hallway, hearing the load echo of my footsteps. Oh how I would like the sound to stop. I didn't have ...

0y characters don't speak to me (most of the time), they just live their lives during my dreams, there, they show their true selves and inspire me to write about ...

Agent jaetwee: espionage division reporting. After spending the last few weeks in Russia, those idiots have told me that they suspect war and have hidden five nuclear bombs in the ...

I'm not from Australia, but I know they use different terminology for some things. E.g. Door handles are called door furniture there. We don't call door handles door furniture. A ...

I'm not from Australia, but I know they use different terminology for some things. E.g. Door handles are called door furniture there. We don't call door handles door furniture. A ...

Jae Dawn Fuoco I watched the woman as she spoke to us. The King has power! I didn't know that. Suddenly, she called out all the Latin names and all ...

Definite improvement.

Not to bad. The first poem and the third poem are the better ones. The second poem doesn't flow too well as ending a line with and or an incomplete ...

It's a bit short and it would of been easier to read if it was broken into paragraphs. I couldn't get a feel of the song so it might be ...

Astounding imagery, I can really picture the scene. What I read out of this is a King who feels that he is trapped by his responsibility to his people. I ...

Something funny and light. Not the best piece of work as it isn't as well structured as a normal story. It is also a bit short, but I guess that's ...