noninjaes

Is it about the pink ninjas?

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It seems that 'somebody' wants MeanMrMustard to change his name to FluffyBunny...

Agent jaetwee | Western Front I crouched on the cold stone floor, my weapon ready in my hand. The lights were off in the warehouse and the last streaks of ...

I'll make the changes, I'm horrible when it comes to tense.

Thank you to those who have helped with their wonderful suggestions. I appreciate all the help that I can get! -The annoying figment of your imagination: jaetwee. I sat on ...

Jae Dawn Fuoco Jae sunk down into her mattress, pulling the sheets up over her face. "Come on Jae, time to get up," said Joey. Jae groaned and rolled over ...

Yes, this is a rather overdue hello message. Had it saved as a draft and forgot about it :0

A rather beautiful poem, though the rhyme scheme is a bit off hand. Punctuation wasn't at it's best and it is slightly unstructured compared to other works that I have ...

I enjoyed reading this poem. I like how you question what defines who you are. You rhyme scheme is good, as well as your flow. The story is also nice ...

I enjoyed this poem. There is lots of emotion in it and a good story too. I like the abcb rhyme scheme in the first two stanzas but then you ...

Hello all new people of YWS. Today is review day - a day where you can't post works so instead you review till you drop! You can join a review ...

I see the idea of corrupting something innocent. You kept the flow good and was pretty consistent with the rhyme scheme. The new lines in the first stanza are a ...

I am very intrigued by your prologue. I am interested as to who these people are, how the girl died and the circumstances of which caused her death. My only ...